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Narration dans l'Ainulindale
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Les articulations ne sont pas arbitraires :
* d’une part on constate une répartition équilibrée du texte ;
* chaque section intérieure commence par la conjonction « Et » que Tolkien emploie comme délimiteur « biblique » ;
* de plus, chaque formule introductive concerne les Valar et leur relation au Monde ;
* enfin, chaque section possède une thématique spécifique dont on a le résumé en isolant le centre de gravité, le cœur même de la section :

(1)
But when
the Valar entered into they were at first astounded and at a loss, for it was as if naught was yet made which they had seen in vision, and all was but on point to begin and yet unshaped,
                                   AND it was dark.
For the Great Music had been but the growth and flowering of thought in the Timeless Halls, and the Vision only a foreshowing; but now they had entered in at the beginning of Time,
(2)
and
the Valar perceived that the World had been but foreshadowed and foresung, and they must achieve it. So began their great labours in wastes unmeasured and unexplored,
                                   AND in ages uncounted and forgotten,
until in the Deeps of Time and in the midst of the vast halls of Eä there came to be that hour and that place where was made the habitation of the Children of Ilúvatar.
(3)
And in this work the chief part was taken by
Manwë and Aulë and Ulmo ; but Melkor too was there from the first, and he meddled in all that was done, turning it if he might to his own desires and purposes;
                                  AND he kindled great fires.
When therefore Earth was yet young and full of flame Melkor coveted it, and he said to the other Valar: 'This shall be my own kingdom; and I name it unto myself!'
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